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The boy analyzed the sand in his mind. He realized that it was kind of like the minerals in the seawater, but extracted from the water. When he examined the sand up close, he could make out all kinds of colors and sizes of sand particles. There were white, clear, pink, orange, brown, green, black, red, blue, purple, and other colors of sand! It was like seeing a sand rainbow!
 
The boy analyzed the sand in his mind. He realized that it was kind of like the minerals in the seawater, but extracted from the water. When he examined the sand up close, he could make out all kinds of colors and sizes of sand particles. There were white, clear, pink, orange, brown, green, black, red, blue, purple, and other colors of sand! It was like seeing a sand rainbow!
  
A projectile flew over his head and over the sand. Was someone skipping rocks? The boy let the object fly, then turned back to the sea. It looked so gorgeous and inviting. He just wanted to jump in and swim. So he did!
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A projectile flew over his head and over the sand. Was someone skipping rocks? The boy let the objects fly, then turned back to the sea. It looked so gorgeous and inviting. He just wanted to jump in and swim. So he did!
  
 
And he swam, and he swam, and he swam, and he swam...
 
And he swam, and he swam, and he swam, and he swam...
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El niño analizó la arena en su mente. Se dio cuenta de que era como los minerales del agua de mar, pero extraídos del agua. Cuando examinó la arena de cerca, pudo distinguir todo tipo de colores y tamaños de partículas de arena. ¡Había arena blanca, transparente, rosa, naranja, marrón, verde, negra, roja, azul, púrpura y otros colores! ¡Era como ver un arcoíris de arena!
 
El niño analizó la arena en su mente. Se dio cuenta de que era como los minerales del agua de mar, pero extraídos del agua. Cuando examinó la arena de cerca, pudo distinguir todo tipo de colores y tamaños de partículas de arena. ¡Había arena blanca, transparente, rosa, naranja, marrón, verde, negra, roja, azul, púrpura y otros colores! ¡Era como ver un arcoíris de arena!
  
Un proyectil voló sobre su cabeza y sobre la arena. ¿Alguien estaba saltando rocas? El niño dejó volar el objeto y luego se volvió hacia el mar. Se veía tan hermoso y atractivo. Solo quería saltar y nadar. ¡Así lo hizo!
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Un proyectil voló sobre su cabeza y sobre la arena. ¿Alguien estaba saltando rocas? El niño dejó volar los objetos y luego se volvió hacia el mar. Se veía tan hermoso y atractivo. Solo quería saltar y nadar. ¡Así lo hizo!
  
 
Y nadó, y nadó, y nadó, y nadó...
 
Y nadó, y nadó, y nadó, y nadó...

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