Editing The Sea

Jump to navigation Jump to search

Warning: You are not logged in. Your IP address will be publicly visible if you make any edits. If you log in or create an account, your edits will be attributed to your username, along with other benefits.

The edit can be undone. Please check the comparison below to verify that this is what you want to do, and then save the changes below to finish undoing the edit.

Latest revision Your text
Line 53: Line 53:
 
He kept walking, and walking, and walking, and walking...
 
He kept walking, and walking, and walking, and walking...
  
Along the way, he came across a stranger. The tall man wore an unusual hat, and he had a huge mustache. Even though the boy thought he looked funny, the man acted very serious. "Where are you going?" The stranger asked.
+
Along the way, he came across a stranger. The tall man wore an ununsual hat, and he had a huge mustache. Even though the boy thought he looked funny, the man acted very serious. "Where are you going?" The stranger asked.
  
 
"I'm going to the sea!" The boy said.
 
"I'm going to the sea!" The boy said.
Line 99: Line 99:
 
And he swam, and he swam, and he swam, and he swam...
 
And he swam, and he swam, and he swam, and he swam...
  
Under the sea, amid the currents and tides the boy could see some fish swimming around. Did this mean that there was a shark nearby? Was the boy about to get eaten? He looked around in fear.
+
Under the sea, the boy could see some fish swimming around. Did this mean that there was a shark nearby? Was the boy about to get eaten? He looked around in fear.
  
 
The boy could see many other strange things under the sea. There were seaweeds and sea urchins, sea slugs and mermaids, octopuses galore, spiky animals with many eyes and scary sea creatures who had giant teeth and seemed to walk on the sea floor. Some creatures were clear and others had remarkable colors or imitated other animals or even glowed. An electric eel swam by, zapping the boy like lightning! It hurt, but the boy gathered up his belongings (which were wet by now) and kept on swimming.
 
The boy could see many other strange things under the sea. There were seaweeds and sea urchins, sea slugs and mermaids, octopuses galore, spiky animals with many eyes and scary sea creatures who had giant teeth and seemed to walk on the sea floor. Some creatures were clear and others had remarkable colors or imitated other animals or even glowed. An electric eel swam by, zapping the boy like lightning! It hurt, but the boy gathered up his belongings (which were wet by now) and kept on swimming.

Please note that all contributions to TaleWOW may be edited, altered, or removed by other contributors. If you do not want your writing to be edited mercilessly, then do not submit it here.
You are also promising us that you wrote this yourself, or copied it from a public domain or similar free resource (see TaleWOW:Copyrights for details). Do not submit copyrighted work without permission!

Cancel Editing help (opens in new window)