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Shirah slips off the ledge of the pool, so delicately that it's imperceptible whether she glides or dives. Sinking rapidly like a seal, she missiles underwater then reemerges in the fresh summer. A glorious shake of the head sends drops of water flying off in all directions, refracting subtle rainbows of light onto her artfully crafted face. She smiles.
 
Shirah slips off the ledge of the pool, so delicately that it's imperceptible whether she glides or dives. Sinking rapidly like a seal, she missiles underwater then reemerges in the fresh summer. A glorious shake of the head sends drops of water flying off in all directions, refracting subtle rainbows of light onto her artfully crafted face. She smiles.
  
In the pool melee, a gaggle of girls are playing a round of full contact keep away, the yellow ball popping in and out of enclosing breasts, legs, bellies, and thighs. One of the girls, Galliana, a tall and leggy blonde, feels the slightest brushstroke up against the small of her back. She turns.
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In the pool melee, a gaggle of girls are playing a round of full contact keep away, the yellow ball popping in and out of enclosing breasts, legs, bellies, and thighs. One of the girls, Gallliana, a tall and leggy blonde, feels the slightest brushstroke up against the small of her back. She turns.
  
 
"Oh. Hey, you," she whispers seductively. "Wanna play?"
 
"Oh. Hey, you," she whispers seductively. "Wanna play?"

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