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You virtually explode with life, yet with control.
 
You virtually explode with life, yet with control.
  
Everywhere around you, and even within you, a new form of activity stirs. Instead of the old  struggle of life, that simple desire to keep on kicking against the every-crushing sea of hurdles and threats, you teem more swimmingly with a fresh kind of activity.
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Everywhere around you, and even within you, a new form of activity stirs. Instead of the old  struggle of life, the simple desire to keep on kicking against the every-crushing sea of hurdles and threats, you teem more swimmingly with a fresh kind of activity.
  
 
Like flying.
 
Like flying.
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“All right!” you agree.
 
“All right!” you agree.
  
With synthaudio filling your audio-processing core, your rhythm automatically shifts and sways and flows like a dozen professional dancers, all slammed into one glamorous body.
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With synthaudio filling your audio-processing core, your rhythm automatically shifts and sways and flows like ten professional dancers, all slammed into one glamorous body.
  
 
“Do you know what you’re doing yet?” asks Natalya.
 
“Do you know what you’re doing yet?” asks Natalya.
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“Um, uh, oh,” you say.
 
“Um, uh, oh,” you say.
  
The flowery hallucinations continue to follow your every wish. Sometimes they even seem to come before your wish.
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The flowery hallucinations continue to follow your every wish. Sometimes they even seem to come before you wish.
  
“So, um, where exactly are we?” you ask.
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“So, where exactly are we?” you ask.
  
“Let me field that one,” says Lupak. “You see, what we did is a kind of reconstitutination of mattergy. So you see, technically there isn’t even a where here. Or, rather, a where.”
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“Let me field that one,” says Lupak. “You see, what we did is a kind of reconstitutination of matterenergy. So you see, technically there isn’t even a where here. Or, rather, a where.”
  
 
“Uh, um.”
 
“Uh, um.”
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“Um, er,” you add.
 
“Um, er,” you add.
  
“So basically we’re in a different world, it sort of started out as part of dimensionspace, although that’s not technically correct because to be accurate it doesn’t actually have a start or an end.”
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“So basically we’re in a different world, it sort of started out as part of dimenionspace, although that’s not technically correct because to be accurate it doesn’t actually have a start or an end.”
  
 
“So, how do you get back and forth with dimensionspace? Or do you?”
 
“So, how do you get back and forth with dimensionspace? Or do you?”
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“No, that’s kind of one of the drawbacks. Once you’re here you can’t exactly leave.”
 
“No, that’s kind of one of the drawbacks. Once you’re here you can’t exactly leave.”
  
“Well, can you inexactly leave, then?” you ask.
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“Well, can you inexactly leave, then?”
  
 
“No, uh, not exactly.”
 
“No, uh, not exactly.”
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“Yeah,” says Lupak. “About that…”
 
“Yeah,” says Lupak. “About that…”
 
* [[Phase Q/Into the Cold|Wake up.]]
 
* [[Phase Q/Interconnections|Cycle through.]]
 
  
 
{{Phase Q}}
 
{{Phase Q}}

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