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Thoughtapses fire away in your mentalstrate. Cycles spin.
 
Thoughtapses fire away in your mentalstrate. Cycles spin.
  
As much as you enjoy the rest from action, the neighboring worlds are starting to push up against your world's borders. It has an effect of bulging at the edges of reality. You also feel a slightly increased pressure.
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As much as you enjoy the rest from action, the neighboring worlds are starting to push up against yours’ borders. It has an effect of bulging at the edges of reality. You also feel a slightly increased pressure.
  
 
The noises give you some ideas. As the mid- and long-period noises vibrate without perceptibly shifting, your mentalstrate roughly bounces along at a similar pace. The odd jostle, usually a sharper disruption, catches your attention. Often it has nothing to do with your K-train of thought, although sometimes you take a wild swingride and follow through to a new path.
 
The noises give you some ideas. As the mid- and long-period noises vibrate without perceptibly shifting, your mentalstrate roughly bounces along at a similar pace. The odd jostle, usually a sharper disruption, catches your attention. Often it has nothing to do with your K-train of thought, although sometimes you take a wild swingride and follow through to a new path.
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Something feels kind of off, or funny.
 
Something feels kind of off, or funny.
  
Maybe some dancing will help, so you cast off your clothing, take a massive hit of the substance that villagers are passing around and vaping, and throw away your inhibitions. Wild music shoots through your veins. Laughter and screams fill the air. You jump up and down and all around, partying with the tribe.
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Maybe some dancing will help, so you cast off your clothing, take a massive hit of the substance that villagers are passing around and inhaling, and throw away your inhibitions. Wild music shoots through your veins. Laughter and screams fill the air. You jump up and down and all around, partying with the tribe.
  
 
Still feeling a bit off, you get slightly dizzy and sick in your stomach. A watcher hands you a bottle, and you take a giant swig. It doesn’t help.
 
Still feeling a bit off, you get slightly dizzy and sick in your stomach. A watcher hands you a bottle, and you take a giant swig. It doesn’t help.
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Then it hits you. You hurl. Up close, you see that it’s no boar on the fire. It’s the businessman.
 
Then it hits you. You hurl. Up close, you see that it’s no boar on the fire. It’s the businessman.
 
* [[Phase Q/No More|Let go.]]
 
* [[Phase Q/Future Forward|Transcend.]]
 
  
 
{{Phase Q}}
 
{{Phase Q}}

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