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A scent of dusk. Or dust. | A scent of dusk. Or dust. | ||
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[[Karmel]] woke up, lying in bed next to his lover. One of them, anyway. | [[Karmel]] woke up, lying in bed next to his lover. One of them, anyway. | ||
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"Be a dear, get me my mug, love," he said. | "Be a dear, get me my mug, love," he said. | ||
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Next to Karmel, a womanly body heaved. With a stretch and a yawn, she lazily got out of bed. | Next to Karmel, a womanly body heaved. With a stretch and a yawn, she lazily got out of bed. | ||
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"Coffee?" she asked. | "Coffee?" she asked. | ||
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"Anything," he said. | "Anything," he said. | ||
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The woman climbed out of bed and trod into the kitchen. Little burbles came out of the kitchen, and the smell of roast coffee. | The woman climbed out of bed and trod into the kitchen. Little burbles came out of the kitchen, and the smell of roast coffee. | ||
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"Do you really love me?" she asked. | "Do you really love me?" she asked. | ||
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"Why yes, of course I do," Karmel answered without any doubt. | "Why yes, of course I do," Karmel answered without any doubt. | ||
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"Then why do you always make eyes at other women?" she asked confusedly. | "Then why do you always make eyes at other women?" she asked confusedly. | ||
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"I already told you," he said. "I love them a lot and one's my wife." | "I already told you," he said. "I love them a lot and one's my wife." | ||
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