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==The Destruction Starts==
 
==The Destruction Starts==
  
The asteroid went dark. Suddenly, the starlight that would normally have arrived, did not.
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The asteroid went dark.
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Suddenly, the starlight that would normally have arrived, did not.
  
 
This was different than the other blackouts. Some of the asteroids had only artificial lights. These often had their power shut off -- because of failure to pay the bills, because of corruption at the suppliers, or these days simply because the pandemic had drained the coffers of much of civilization.
 
This was different than the other blackouts. Some of the asteroids had only artificial lights. These often had their power shut off -- because of failure to pay the bills, because of corruption at the suppliers, or these days simply because the pandemic had drained the coffers of much of civilization.
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Rigel arrived at the League base, unnoticed. With the advantage of an advanced Order spy ship, and detailed Order maps, Rigel had the upper hand. The League had defended its last stronghold with as much force as it could muster, yet this paled next to the mighty Order.
 
Rigel arrived at the League base, unnoticed. With the advantage of an advanced Order spy ship, and detailed Order maps, Rigel had the upper hand. The League had defended its last stronghold with as much force as it could muster, yet this paled next to the mighty Order.
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"Who are you?" The stunned League senior representative asked Rigel.
 
"Who are you?" The stunned League senior representative asked Rigel.
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Just now, as things seemed to be straightening out, as civilization seemed to be recovering from its grave illness, here was Rigel, threatening to dismantle the whole thing.
 
Just now, as things seemed to be straightening out, as civilization seemed to be recovering from its grave illness, here was Rigel, threatening to dismantle the whole thing.
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"Why are you going along with this?" asked an elderly representative.
 
"Why are you going along with this?" asked an elderly representative.
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"Going along with what?" said Rigel.
 
"Going along with what?" said Rigel.
  
"With-- ''this''," answered the elderly representative, making an expansive gesture. "This nonsense. This whole thing. Didn't we train you to be an honest citizen? Haven't you any concern for the well-being of your fellow citizens -- whether in the League or in that ''other'' organization?"
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"With-- ''this''," answered the elderly representative, making an expansive gesture. "This nonsense. This whole thing. Didn't we train you to be an honest citizen? Haven't you any concern for the wellbeing of your fellow citizens -- whether in the League or in that ''other'' organization?"
  
 
"Yes, of course I have," said Rigel. "Just what are you getting at?"
 
"Yes, of course I have," said Rigel. "Just what are you getting at?"
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"There, you said it yourself," said Rigel, seeming to claim victory even though his opponent remained set against him. "''Or''. Or what? You admitted you don't know."
 
"There, you said it yourself," said Rigel, seeming to claim victory even though his opponent remained set against him. "''Or''. Or what? You admitted you don't know."
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"So?" said the elder statesman.
 
"So?" said the elder statesman.
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"Yeah, it's a game-changer," she thought she heard one guard say.
 
"Yeah, it's a game-changer," she thought she heard one guard say.
  
Slowly, the news trickled through the prison cells. An important League base had been attacked, and apparently put up not much resistance. This may well spell the end of the League, rumor had it.
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Slowly, the news trickled through the prison cells. An League important base had been attacked, and apparently put up not much resistance. This may well spell the end of the League, rumor had it.
  
 
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"This is where it ends," said Rigel firmly.
 
"This is where it ends," said Rigel firmly.
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