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Rigel steered directly towards the station.
 
Rigel steered directly towards the station.
 
 
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On a small backwaters asteroid, Rast sat around his shack.  His employer, a factory that processed sewage from the local pond into lubricants, had shut down during the pandemic. At this rate, it didn't look like it would reopen any time soon.
 
On a small backwaters asteroid, Rast sat around his shack.  His employer, a factory that processed sewage from the local pond into lubricants, had shut down during the pandemic. At this rate, it didn't look like it would reopen any time soon.
  
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On the data links, Rast searched our various chemical formulae. The data links contained apps that showed different molecules, including how they could connect with other molecules. Rast searched through the molecules that he knew were in the pond liquid, as well as molecules that he found in his tests.
 
On the data links, Rast searched our various chemical formulae. The data links contained apps that showed different molecules, including how they could connect with other molecules. Rast searched through the molecules that he knew were in the pond liquid, as well as molecules that he found in his tests.
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Many molecules came up empty. None of the configurations that Rast tested produced any effects. He had tried to produce a beverage that would get him happy. The layoffs had brought about significant depression.
 
Many molecules came up empty. None of the configurations that Rast tested produced any effects. He had tried to produce a beverage that would get him happy. The layoffs had brought about significant depression.
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Rast kept at it. Even as his finances ran dry, as the plant remained shuttered, Rast kept experimenting on his solutions.
 
Rast kept at it. Even as his finances ran dry, as the plant remained shuttered, Rast kept experimenting on his solutions.
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Rast's wife became concerned. Not only were they running out of food, now her husband had taken to his tests. Instead of pursuing some other productive activity, a side business like some of his colleagues and neighbors had pursued, he seemed to be going crazy. She often complained to her friends.
 
Rast's wife became concerned. Not only were they running out of food, now her husband had taken to his tests. Instead of pursuing some other productive activity, a side business like some of his colleagues and neighbors had pursued, he seemed to be going crazy. She often complained to her friends.
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After numerous failures, and the occasional partial success, Rast stumbled upon something unusual. This differed not only from his previous results, but even from what he thought was possible. All of the reading that he had done on the data links showed that this was impossible, yet it had happened anyways.
 
After numerous failures, and the occasional partial success, Rast stumbled upon something unusual. This differed not only from his previous results, but even from what he thought was possible. All of the reading that he had done on the data links showed that this was impossible, yet it had happened anyways.
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Rast's asteroid had become a media sensation. Every night, huge numbers of people around the galaxy tuned in to watch the latest newscasts. MIRACLE CURE.
 
Rast's asteroid had become a media sensation. Every night, huge numbers of people around the galaxy tuned in to watch the latest newscasts. MIRACLE CURE.
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Some of Rast's neighbors visited him. They showed up on their rockriders, rolling rocks that they kicked along only somewhat faster than walking. Until now, Rast's neighbors had regarded him as unfortunate. They thought he had lost his mind. Now that the media had descended, Rast had become the most popular resident of the asteroid.
 
Some of Rast's neighbors visited him. They showed up on their rockriders, rolling rocks that they kicked along only somewhat faster than walking. Until now, Rast's neighbors had regarded him as unfortunate. They thought he had lost his mind. Now that the media had descended, Rast had become the most popular resident of the asteroid.
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Rast had made so many friends, he didn't know what to do. Soon his visor was so full of messages, announcements, gifts, and other notifications, that he could only see a small patch of the space in front of him.
 
Rast had made so many friends, he didn't know what to do. Soon his visor was so full of messages, announcements, gifts, and other notifications, that he could only see a small patch of the space in front of him.
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A few weeks after he had made headlines, Rast had taken to being a celebrity. He had started wearing more decorative clothing, unlike the rags that he used to wear (his wife wondered where he had got the money, since they still hadn't received much for their efforts).
 
A few weeks after he had made headlines, Rast had taken to being a celebrity. He had started wearing more decorative clothing, unlike the rags that he used to wear (his wife wondered where he had got the money, since they still hadn't received much for their efforts).
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The asteroid itself became noteworthy. While its official name was only A150874854, and its residents had colloquially known it as "the 'Roid", after hitting it big the asteroid was officially renamed to Asteroidae Curis. Also, the media started referring to it as "the Rastroid."
 
The asteroid itself became noteworthy. While its official name was only A150874854, and its residents had colloquially known it as "the 'Roid", after hitting it big the asteroid was officially renamed to Asteroidae Curis. Also, the media started referring to it as "the Rastroid."
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There was chaos. As reporters and locals jostled in the hallways of Rast's house, a fight broke out. Even the reporters there didn't realize that the Order had an agent present.
 
There was chaos. As reporters and locals jostled in the hallways of Rast's house, a fight broke out. Even the reporters there didn't realize that the Order had an agent present.
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Even thousands of years after the pandemic had broken out, it remained a force to be reckoned with. Perhaps more so, as some argued, as a media force rather than a medical force.
 
Even thousands of years after the pandemic had broken out, it remained a force to be reckoned with. Perhaps more so, as some argued, as a media force rather than a medical force.
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At 9,873 years old, Rigel thought that one hadn't really lived until one had reached at least nine thousand.
 
At 9,873 years old, Rigel thought that one hadn't really lived until one had reached at least nine thousand.
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==8.4==
 
==8.4==

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