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==Cures==
 
==Cures==
  
Rigel watched as the decaying structure of space evaporated. He had longed for this moment for so long. So many thousands of years, building up to these few seconds. Now, to watch his plans unfold, he felt unsure even in hindsight. Had he acted wrongly? Rigel didn't exactly regret starting the chain reaction. But he also didn't feel certain that he wanted it.
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Rigel watched as the decaying structure of space evaporated. He had longed for this moment for so long. So many thousands of years, building up to these few seconds.
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Now, to watch his plans unfold, he felt unsure even in hindsight. Had he acted wrongly?
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Rigel didn't exactly regret starting the chain reaction. But he also didn't feel certain that he wanted it.
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The other species in space seemed shocked. Who would do such a thing? ''Why?''
 
The other species in space seemed shocked. Who would do such a thing? ''Why?''
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Rast tried to hold back the crowds. "It's going to be fine," he said, failing in his attempt to sound reassuring.
 
Rast tried to hold back the crowds. "It's going to be fine," he said, failing in his attempt to sound reassuring.
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The crowd pushed towards Rast. Some people got near enough to reach out and grab him. He recoiled.
 
The crowd pushed towards Rast. Some people got near enough to reach out and grab him. He recoiled.
  
"We have been advised that there is now an official blackout imposed against the 'Roid," said Rast. The locals perked up. At least they knew he was catering to them, even if ineffectually.
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"We have been advised that there is now an official blackout imposed against the 'Roid," said Rast. The locals perked up. At least they knew he was catering to them, even if inefectually.
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"The lights will remain off for another few rounds. Until then, the mines will remain shuttered. Please continue with your off-duty activities."
 
"The lights will remain off for another few rounds. Until then, the mines will remain shuttered. Please continue with your off-duty activities."
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"Who made him an official representative?" someone in the crowd asked another attendee.
 
"Who made him an official representative?" someone in the crowd asked another attendee.
  
 
"You find one molecule in a dirty asteroid, and suddenly you think you're king of the universe."
 
"You find one molecule in a dirty asteroid, and suddenly you think you're king of the universe."
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Rast looked out at the crowd. Suddenly his instincts seemed to jump into action. Whereas before he had always seemed something of an outsider on the 'Roid -- now the Rasteroid -- he had developed into a fuller version of himself in light of the molecule find. Perhaps he had always had greatness inside of him, but only required a difficult situation to bring it out.
 
Rast looked out at the crowd. Suddenly his instincts seemed to jump into action. Whereas before he had always seemed something of an outsider on the 'Roid -- now the Rasteroid -- he had developed into a fuller version of himself in light of the molecule find. Perhaps he had always had greatness inside of him, but only required a difficult situation to bring it out.
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Rast was brought back by the figures from the ship. They loaded him onboard. Somehow, even without knowing what was happening or why, Rast had cooperated. It was as if he had known that they were coming for him, even though he would have had no logical way of knowing.
 
Rast was brought back by the figures from the ship. They loaded him onboard. Somehow, even without knowing what was happening or why, Rast had cooperated. It was as if he had known that they were coming for him, even though he would have had no logical way of knowing.
  
Onboard, the figures probed Rast. They inserted various measuring devices, recording the outputs. Occasionally they asked Rast to move this body part in this direction, or that body part in that direction. Rast went through the motions, as if half asleep. After the lengthy series of probings, Rast was put into a slightly more comfortable room.
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Onboard, the figures probed Rast. They inserted various measuring devices, recording the outputs. Occasionally they asked Rast to move this body part in this direction, or that body part in that direction. Rast went through the motions, as if half asleep.
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After the lengthy series of probings, Rast was put into a slightly more comfortable room.
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The figures disappeared. Rast, left on his own, at first rested for a while. The excitement of all the recent events had taken its toll on him.
 
The figures disappeared. Rast, left on his own, at first rested for a while. The excitement of all the recent events had taken its toll on him.
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Later, when he felt somewhat refreshed, his natural curiosity took hold. Rast got up, looking around the room. Unsure whether he was supposed to stay still, since the figures hadn't told him anything -- Rast didn't even know if they spoke his language -- he looked about the room casually. Not wanting to cause too much of a disturbance, Rast avoided lifting any covers or pushing any buttons. Still, he scanned the room, putting together a rough sense of where he was.
 
Later, when he felt somewhat refreshed, his natural curiosity took hold. Rast got up, looking around the room. Unsure whether he was supposed to stay still, since the figures hadn't told him anything -- Rast didn't even know if they spoke his language -- he looked about the room casually. Not wanting to cause too much of a disturbance, Rast avoided lifting any covers or pushing any buttons. Still, he scanned the room, putting together a rough sense of where he was.
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In the smallish room, Rast found a board covered in knobs and other controls, of whose purpose he wasn't sure. Also, he found some containers of liquids. They were translucent in different colors -- purple, green, blue, yellow. Again, Rast couldn't make out what they were there for. In addition to this, the sparse room had the bed on which he had been resting, and what looked like a light.
 
In the smallish room, Rast found a board covered in knobs and other controls, of whose purpose he wasn't sure. Also, he found some containers of liquids. They were translucent in different colors -- purple, green, blue, yellow. Again, Rast couldn't make out what they were there for. In addition to this, the sparse room had the bed on which he had been resting, and what looked like a light.
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Not seeing anything further to investigate, Rast went back onto the bed. Now he sat up, thinking attentively. After finding the molecule, which was now widely considered a cure for the pandemic disease, everything had changed for Rast. Suddenly, he could do no wrong -- or he could do no right, depending on whose side one was on. All this made things so confusing for poor Rast. Now he had no idea what was true or false, or if such conditions as true or false even prevailed. He was blinded by the floodlights of attention cast upon him.
 
Not seeing anything further to investigate, Rast went back onto the bed. Now he sat up, thinking attentively. After finding the molecule, which was now widely considered a cure for the pandemic disease, everything had changed for Rast. Suddenly, he could do no wrong -- or he could do no right, depending on whose side one was on. All this made things so confusing for poor Rast. Now he had no idea what was true or false, or if such conditions as true or false even prevailed. He was blinded by the floodlights of attention cast upon him.
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Back on the Rasteroid, as it was now known, things hadn't changed much since Rast's departure. No one had seem him being taken away by the figures. Many residents didn't even know, or believe, that he was gone. To them, the media circus atmosphere prevailed on their asteroid home.
 
Back on the Rasteroid, as it was now known, things hadn't changed much since Rast's departure. No one had seem him being taken away by the figures. Many residents didn't even know, or believe, that he was gone. To them, the media circus atmosphere prevailed on their asteroid home.
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Media reports appeared portraying the disappearance of Rast as a political ploy, a police action, and numerous other plots. The difference between tabloid and respectable journal, if there had ever been one, disappeared as fast as Rast had.
 
Media reports appeared portraying the disappearance of Rast as a political ploy, a police action, and numerous other plots. The difference between tabloid and respectable journal, if there had ever been one, disappeared as fast as Rast had.
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Poor Rast's wife underwent a panic attack. She often turned to Talia, the reporter who had been the first on the scene, and was now her only friend. Rast's wife often talked to Talia for comfort, not realizing that much of what she said wound up in the interstellar news reports. Rast's wife had not been reading the news, as she couldn't bear the roller coaster ride of emotions with every report about here husband's whereabouts, which often turned out to be false.
 
Poor Rast's wife underwent a panic attack. She often turned to Talia, the reporter who had been the first on the scene, and was now her only friend. Rast's wife often talked to Talia for comfort, not realizing that much of what she said wound up in the interstellar news reports. Rast's wife had not been reading the news, as she couldn't bear the roller coaster ride of emotions with every report about here husband's whereabouts, which often turned out to be false.
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For Talia, this was the landmark story of her career. She had come to the Rasteroid hopeful of finding a wacky "weirdly enough" style story. Country bumpkin thinks he found a cure, she could picture the headlines. Instead, she had found the real deal. Before she was writer, now she was a Writer with a capital W. She could smell the Poolitzer.
 
For Talia, this was the landmark story of her career. She had come to the Rasteroid hopeful of finding a wacky "weirdly enough" style story. Country bumpkin thinks he found a cure, she could picture the headlines. Instead, she had found the real deal. Before she was writer, now she was a Writer with a capital W. She could smell the Poolitzer.
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Here on this remote mining asteroid, shut down by the very virus for which the country bumpkin had found a remedy, Talia had found that Rast was indeed far more sensitive and intelligent than she had expected. That explained how he had found a cure -- and why he had behaved so bizarrely during the shutdown.
 
Here on this remote mining asteroid, shut down by the very virus for which the country bumpkin had found a remedy, Talia had found that Rast was indeed far more sensitive and intelligent than she had expected. That explained how he had found a cure -- and why he had behaved so bizarrely during the shutdown.
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The ship brought Rast back through huge distances of space, to a base. Of course, Rast had no way of knowing where he was. Without charts, he was as lost as a needle in a haystack. The ship could have traveled in practically any direction, any distance.
 
The ship brought Rast back through huge distances of space, to a base. Of course, Rast had no way of knowing where he was. Without charts, he was as lost as a needle in a haystack. The ship could have traveled in practically any direction, any distance.
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The ship docked. The figures led Rast into the base. While he hadn't been physically restrained, Rast still felt under their control. Alone in an unknown part of space, there was nothing he could do if they wanted to harm him.
 
The ship docked. The figures led Rast into the base. While he hadn't been physically restrained, Rast still felt under their control. Alone in an unknown part of space, there was nothing he could do if they wanted to harm him.
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Through a series of hallways, the figures led Rast into an open chamber. There, a panel of people sat opposite him. Rast was seated by the figures, who then departed.
 
Through a series of hallways, the figures led Rast into an open chamber. There, a panel of people sat opposite him. Rast was seated by the figures, who then departed.
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The panel members looked at Rast with as much curiosity as he looked at them. Each one wore what looked like a lab coat adapted for space. These were decorative uniforms, but they bore the reminders of who these people were: some of the most respected medical professionals in the universe. This was the epidemiology board in charge of the pandemic.
 
The panel members looked at Rast with as much curiosity as he looked at them. Each one wore what looked like a lab coat adapted for space. These were decorative uniforms, but they bore the reminders of who these people were: some of the most respected medical professionals in the universe. This was the epidemiology board in charge of the pandemic.
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"How are you feeling?" a panel member asked Rast.
 
"How are you feeling?" a panel member asked Rast.
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Rast thought back to the asteroid. His wife probably was thinking of him just now.
 
Rast thought back to the asteroid. His wife probably was thinking of him just now.
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Back on the asteroid, Rast's wife was indeed thinking of him. She wanted him to be there with her.
 
Back on the asteroid, Rast's wife was indeed thinking of him. She wanted him to be there with her.
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Of the many rumors around the asteroid, the most popular was that Rast had faked is own disappearance, remaining on the asteroid. Residents had become suspicious, because Rast so often seemed to find himself at the center of attention. After they had made fun of him for so long, they didn't like his having so much fame, which even reached way beyond the asteroid itself.
 
Of the many rumors around the asteroid, the most popular was that Rast had faked is own disappearance, remaining on the asteroid. Residents had become suspicious, because Rast so often seemed to find himself at the center of attention. After they had made fun of him for so long, they didn't like his having so much fame, which even reached way beyond the asteroid itself.
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Just as Rast was addressing the assembled board of the epidemiological board, Rigel's chain reaction ripped through the room. They hydrogen atoms in the room snapped into rigid lines, as they had elsewhere throughout the universe. Suddenly, the pandemic, the cure, all of that seemed useless, empty.
 
Just as Rast was addressing the assembled board of the epidemiological board, Rigel's chain reaction ripped through the room. They hydrogen atoms in the room snapped into rigid lines, as they had elsewhere throughout the universe. Suddenly, the pandemic, the cure, all of that seemed useless, empty.
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==Molecular Solutions==
 
==Molecular Solutions==

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