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"So," said Morp. "You've finally come around. That makes me feel--" he paused, searching for words. This was unfamiliar emotional territory for him. "Happy? Something like that."
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"So," said Morp. "You've finally come around. That makes me feel--" he paused, searching for words. This was unfamiliar emotional territory for him. "Happy?" Something like that."
  
 
"I'm doing this for the good of the universe," said Rigel seriously.
 
"I'm doing this for the good of the universe," said Rigel seriously.
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Within the League area, personnel remained calm. The people here had become accustomed to quiet. To being left alone. For tens of thousands of years, this base had remained untouched. In a region of space that even most League members ignored, the League had erected a veil.  
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Within the League area, personnel remained calm.
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The people here had become accustomed to quiet. To being left alone. For tens of thousands of years, this base had remained untouched.
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In a region of space that even most League members ignored, the League had erected a veil.  
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Practically no light could enter or exit this region of space. Devices ringing the region intercepted incoming or outgoing radiation. By applying an inverse wave, it was possible to block out this zone. An invisibility cloak for an entire region of space.
 
Practically no light could enter or exit this region of space. Devices ringing the region intercepted incoming or outgoing radiation. By applying an inverse wave, it was possible to block out this zone. An invisibility cloak for an entire region of space.
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Now, however, Rigel had pierced the veil.
 
Now, however, Rigel had pierced the veil.
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Piloting his ship through the region, he was not met by any League ships. Not even intercepted by the usual escorts, which he had expected.  Only Rigel against the stars.
 
Piloting his ship through the region, he was not met by any League ships. Not even intercepted by the usual escorts, which he had expected.  Only Rigel against the stars.
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In the secret base, the doddering old leaders of the League seemed unaware of how dire their situation had become. Though their bodies had not aged at all for thousands of years, their minds had decayed from use, or disuse, as the case may be.
 
In the secret base, the doddering old leaders of the League seemed unaware of how dire their situation had become. Though their bodies had not aged at all for thousands of years, their minds had decayed from use, or disuse, as the case may be.
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"We'll have to return the universe to better condition again over the upcoming centuries, said one immortal, for all here were immortals. Unbeknownst to him, the Order was just then readying the final destruction of the universe. And their trigger man was rapidly approaching the doddering old fool.
 
"We'll have to return the universe to better condition again over the upcoming centuries, said one immortal, for all here were immortals. Unbeknownst to him, the Order was just then readying the final destruction of the universe. And their trigger man was rapidly approaching the doddering old fool.
  
Rigel looked sternly into his visor. In addition to the navigation view, showing his approaching ship near to the secret League base, Rigel had summoned up a view of the critical infrastructure of the base. Rigel traced out the diagrams of the base in his mind, readying his penetration.
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Rigel looked sternly into his visor. In addition to the navigation view, showing his approaching ship near to the secret League base, Rigel had summoned up a view of the critical infrastructure of the base.
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Rigel traced out the diagrams of the base in his mind, readying his penetration.
  
 
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In the quarantine zone, desperation rose. Many civilians had taken to wearing extra protective equipment, even though it had not been shown to reduce the effects of the illness. Further, even the cautious epidemiological board had recommended again the suits for civilians.
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In the quarantine zone, desperation rose.
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Many civilians had taken to wearing extra protective equipment, even though it had not been shown to reduce the effects of the illness. Further, even the cautious epidemiological board had recommended again the suits for civilians.
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Populations paid attention to the newscasts. The media made out like bandits, even as entire industries fell apart.
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"Epidemiology chic," one headline called it. People going about their planets in their large protective suits. The cartoonists had a heydey with it.
  
Populations paid attention to the newscasts. The media made out like bandits, even as entire industries fell apart. "Epidemiology chic," one headline called it. People going about their planets in their large protective suits. The cartoonists had a heyday with it.
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On some of the smaller asteroids, detached as they were from the main planets, life went on more or less normally. Many of the asteroid-dwellers here had no use for the news, the heavy suits, or any of the other pandemic paraphernalia.
 
On some of the smaller asteroids, detached as they were from the main planets, life went on more or less normally. Many of the asteroid-dwellers here had no use for the news, the heavy suits, or any of the other pandemic paraphernalia.
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The ''Vermitrius'' had spread. From the ship where Vespa had landed, small clumps of the stuff had snuck over to other ships. Then, the species had made its way back into Order bases. Soon, much of the Order had been contaminated, for their own benefit.
 
The ''Vermitrius'' had spread. From the ship where Vespa had landed, small clumps of the stuff had snuck over to other ships. Then, the species had made its way back into Order bases. Soon, much of the Order had been contaminated, for their own benefit.
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Order ships buzzed with activity. Neat rows of chemistry benches worked actively. The military operated with precision. They had cleaned out most League sectors. Indeed, they had cleaned out most of the reachable universe.
 
Order ships buzzed with activity. Neat rows of chemistry benches worked actively. The military operated with precision. They had cleaned out most League sectors. Indeed, they had cleaned out most of the reachable universe.
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There still remained traces of the spontaneity that had led to earlier Order advances. Not that the Order had ever had that much looseness, but where there had been some before, now it was gone.
 
There still remained traces of the spontaneity that had led to earlier Order advances. Not that the Order had ever had that much looseness, but where there had been some before, now it was gone.
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The Order had taken its mature form. From its early start out of the last collapse, through its vying against the then-dominant League, the Order now exercised near total control over a large region of space. Its military had become the organizational method for all species encompassed within the region.
 
The Order had taken its mature form. From its early start out of the last collapse, through its vying against the then-dominant League, the Order now exercised near total control over a large region of space. Its military had become the organizational method for all species encompassed within the region.
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Vespa was arrested.
 
Vespa was arrested.
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