Editing 6 Billion A.D./Chapter 2

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==2.4==When we got down the road thru  
 
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a large stone gate the guard took of their helmet and then gave me a thumbs up,the high sodium levels in the air had bleached their hair and their face as well.I breathed a sigh of relief as my suits alarms had turned off.So I push the fluid pump option on my suit.The suit pump was slow due to the damages to it.The guard nervous thumbed at their rifle.It worked well enough I could take my helmet off,so I did."Good looking for a smuggled passenger ain't you ,the guard jeered."."We are required to take you to the town gate watch commander if you are allowed clearance to enter the rural zone if not I'll have to leave you for dead,the guard spoke in a military trained voice.".That being said they continued further down the road and stopped at the edge of series of shear cement enclosures next to a series of solar powered jeeps.The guard climbed out and motions me towards a set of large bay doors.I followed.When I caught up
 
a large stone gate the guard took of their helmet and then gave me a thumbs up,the high sodium levels in the air had bleached their hair and their face as well.I breathed a sigh of relief as my suits alarms had turned off.So I push the fluid pump option on my suit.The suit pump was slow due to the damages to it.The guard nervous thumbed at their rifle.It worked well enough I could take my helmet off,so I did."Good looking for a smuggled passenger ain't you ,the guard jeered."."We are required to take you to the town gate watch commander if you are allowed clearance to enter the rural zone if not I'll have to leave you for dead,the guard spoke in a military trained voice.".That being said they continued further down the road and stopped at the edge of series of shear cement enclosures next to a series of solar powered jeeps.The guard climbed out and motions me towards a set of large bay doors.I followed.When I caught up
the guard opened the doors.We then walked down a short corridor which had a series of hinge locking doors.We got to a certain door marking what seemed to have a coded name plate on it.The guard opened the door and motions me forwards.The small hallway had a scanner I prayed that my illness was not transferable as the scanner beams lit up and began scanning me.Thankfully I got the green light and another door opened to a suit lockup.I went in with my helmet on which is generally the procedure to find one lock up had a green light on so pushed it open.I then placed my now emptied suit piece by piece into the lock up.Strecthing out afterwards I was then alarmed as a voice spoke thru an intercom."Please continue to the door with the green light no delays,the voice barked."So I did as directed until I came to a door.Thru it was a room filled with lush furniture and paintings. A man sitting in a chair greeted me. He wore a very ill fitting robe despite this decadence that surrounded him. "We're always thrilled to have an unwelcome guest." I quickly told him my story. “A sad story indeed, but why did you come here?” “I can pay,” I retorted. The man in the ill-fitted robe laughed. “We don’t really need the money. It’s more a matter of desperate research on desperate people. If you can pay in courage that will suffice. My name is Lom be the way, let me introduce you to the rest of the assemble.” ...
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the guard opened the doors.We then walked down a short corridor which had a series of hinge locking doors.We got to a certain door marking what seemed to have a coded name plate on it.The guard opened the door and motions me forwards.The small hallway had a scanner I prayed that my illness was not transferable as the scanner beams lit up and began scanning me.Thankfully I got the green light and another door opened to a suit lockup.I went in with my helmet on which is generally the procedure to find one lock up had a green light on so pushed it open.I then placed my now emptied suit piece by piece into the lock up.Strecthing out afterwards I was then alarmed as a voice spoke thru an intercom."Please continue to the door with the green light no delays,the voice barked."So I did as directed until I came to a door.Thru it was a room filled with lush furniture and paintings. A man sitting in a chair greeted me. He wore a very ill fitting robe despite this decadence that surrounded him. "We're always thrilled to have an unwelcome guest."
  
We entered an even more luxurious room, where three men and one woman were sitting playing the game toloz. “Everyone this is Rigel. He has like a week left to live or something like that.” “My kind of people,” the woman looked up. “What do you mean by that.” “I like dead people, they’re quiet. I’m Deolonis by the way.” Nice to meet you. The man to the right placed his piece and yelled “toloz!” Everyone threw down their cards. The man who won stood up, “you know what this place is right, people come here to die.” ...
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“I can pay,” I retorted. The man in the ill-fitted robe laughed. “We don’t really need the money. It’s more a matter of desperate research on desperate people. If you can pay in courage that will suffice. My name is Lom be the way, let me introduce you to the rest of the assemble.” ...
  
 
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