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In the soil, the moist wet molecules slip through your fingers. Like mud, almost. A worm would thrive here. A worm like Ruthernuss.
 
In the soil, the moist wet molecules slip through your fingers. Like mud, almost. A worm would thrive here. A worm like Ruthernuss.
  
In the darkness, you savor the few moments away from the Flowrisers.Your mind roams freely.
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In the darkness, you savor the few moments away from the Futuristas. Your mind roams freely.
  
Sure, you could carry on with the outcast crew, in the likely vain hope of connecting with a larger node on the tubeworks. But then what? Wander aimlessly for a few more years, until the Triad forces finally catch you? No gain there.
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Sure, you could carry on with the outcast crew, in the likely vain hope of connecting with a larger node on the tubeworks. But then what? Wander aimlessly for a few more years, until the Trad forces finally catch you? No gain there.
  
 
Or… Or, you think, with growing enthusiasm, you could rat out these punks, collect a cool reward, and get back to the simple life. Isn’t that what you once wanted? Hard to remember.
 
Or… Or, you think, with growing enthusiasm, you could rat out these punks, collect a cool reward, and get back to the simple life. Isn’t that what you once wanted? Hard to remember.
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''Snort.'' You hear a muffled sound from the car. Probably Natalya snoring. Poor thing, no family, no job, no hope. You feel sorry for her. Yet, sorry enough to sell out your own life?
 
''Snort.'' You hear a muffled sound from the car. Probably Natalya snoring. Poor thing, no family, no job, no hope. You feel sorry for her. Yet, sorry enough to sell out your own life?
  
Afraid to awaken the Flowrisers, you curtail your meandering thoughts and walk away from the car as quietly as you can.
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Afraid to awaken the Futuristas, you curtail your meandering thoughts and walk away from the car as quietly as you can.
  
 
“Hey.”
 
“Hey.”
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“Hey. Over here.”
 
“Hey. Over here.”
  
Looking closely, you see that the voice is coming from a pile of belongings that the Flowrisers left by the riverbank. But there’s no room for anyone to hide there.
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Looking closely, you see that the voice is coming from a pile of belongings that the Futuristas left by the riverbank. But there’s no room for anyone to hide there.
  
 
“Psst, are you listening?”
 
“Psst, are you listening?”
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“It doesn’t matter what I care, you’re a citizen, and any citizen outside of the authorized zones is subject to immediate arrest. And with those tramps? Death.”
 
“It doesn’t matter what I care, you’re a citizen, and any citizen outside of the authorized zones is subject to immediate arrest. And with those tramps? Death.”
  
“Look,” you say to the Flowriser campaign pin. “What do you want from me? You’re already destroying the country.”
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“Look,” you say to the Futurista campaign pin. “What do you want from me? You’re already destroying the country.”
  
 
An eerie silence fills the still night air. Until a car door opens.
 
An eerie silence fills the still night air. Until a car door opens.

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