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You wake up. The anesthetic wore off.
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You wake up. The anaesthetic wore off.
  
 
Uh oh.
 
Uh oh.
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You feel like you can move about freely. Like swimming. You can turn upside down, spin, flip. Yet, whichever way you face, all you see is the endless, empty blackness.
 
You feel like you can move about freely. Like swimming. You can turn upside down, spin, flip. Yet, whichever way you face, all you see is the endless, empty blackness.
  
And your arm hurts like dark.
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And your arm hurts like fuck.
  
 
Why are you here?
 
Why are you here?
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Hm, something there, at least.
 
Hm, something there, at least.
  
You remember the Triad-Fyuchee wars, the Zonnyxes, the tubeworks.
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You remember the Trad-Fyuchee wars, the Zonnyxes, the tubeworks.
  
 
Did you die? Maybe this is what happens when you die. You’ve never been dead before. Is this what it’s like?
 
Did you die? Maybe this is what happens when you die. You’ve never been dead before. Is this what it’s like?
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Ah! That’s it. She must have sold you out. Got you turned in to whoever won the war. Then they killed you.
 
Ah! That’s it. She must have sold you out. Got you turned in to whoever won the war. Then they killed you.
  
“Ow, sound,” you mutter.
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“Ow, shit,” you mutter.
  
 
If you’re so dead, then why does your shoulder stump still hurt?
 
If you’re so dead, then why does your shoulder stump still hurt?
  
Maybe you’re not dead. Maybe this is the afterlife. Or some kind of new digital cage. Maybe it’s a digital cage but they took away the traditional illusion of walls and bars.
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Maybe you’re not dead. Maybe this is the afterlife. Or some kind of new digital cage. Maybe it’s a digital age but they took away the traditional illusion of walls and bars.
  
 
You swim about a bit in the nothingness.
 
You swim about a bit in the nothingness.
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No, if this were a digital cage then you wouldn’t be able to float so freely.
 
No, if this were a digital cage then you wouldn’t be able to float so freely.
  
''Zap!''
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Zap!
  
 
What was that?
 
What was that?
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“That’s still undetermined.”
 
“That’s still undetermined.”
  
“Well, can you determine it?” you ask.
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“Well, can you determine it?”
  
 
“No, not as of yet. Sorry.”
 
“No, not as of yet. Sorry.”
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“Yes,” thinks the presence. “We have an idea.”
 
“Yes,” thinks the presence. “We have an idea.”
 
* [[Phase Q/Interconnections|Go along for the ride.]]
 
* [[Phase Q/Back in the Future|Return to the island again.]]
 
  
 
{{Phase Q}}
 
{{Phase Q}}

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