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Natalya opens her mouth to speak to you. However, a deep, throaty man’s voice comes out. Booming like a general: “What are you doing here? I thought you were dead.”
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Natalya opens her mouth to speak to you. A deep, throaty man’s voice comes out. Booming like a general: “What are you doing here? I thought you were dead.”
  
 
You reply, stunned: “I thought you were.”
 
You reply, stunned: “I thought you were.”
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Looking behind you, you see many flying objects. No sign of an entrance or exit or anywhere you came from. Just this bright space all around you.
 
Looking behind you, you see many flying objects. No sign of an entrance or exit or anywhere you came from. Just this bright space all around you.
  
Natalya seems to have something against you. She keeps on coming back with new weaponry. Maybe you betrayed her? Her blouse opens up, and her breasts seem to heave out a ray of multicolored light, which blasts through everything in its path.
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Natalya seems to have something against you. She keeps on coming back with new weaponry. Maybe you betrayed her? Her blouse opens up, and her breast seems to heave out a ray of multicolored light, which blasts through everything in its path.
  
As the rainbow ray approaches, you desperately ask yourself how to leave this place. The subtle voice seems to hear you, and whispers: “It takes a pass to get in, and a key to get out.”
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As the rainbow ray approaches, you desperately ask yourself how to leave this place. The subtle voice seems to hear you, and says: “It takes a pass to get in, and a key to get out.”
  
 
You don’t have any keys. The light ray hits you. It feels like a fizzy stream of fire. A hole cores through you where the rainbow goes.
 
You don’t have any keys. The light ray hits you. It feels like a fizzy stream of fire. A hole cores through you where the rainbow goes.
  
“Ahhhhhhhh!” you scream. Your scream turns into visible soundwaves as it leaves your mouth. The waves travel a few hundred meters and hit Natalya. As they do so, they modulate her voice. The words she speaks adapt to the waveform of your scream, turning into a more moderate yet undulating intonation than the general’s commands.
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“Ahhhhhhhh!” you scream. Your scream turns into visible soundwaves as it leaves your mouth. The waves travel a few hundred meters and hit Natalya. As they do so, they modulate her voice. The words she speaks adapt to the waveform of your scream, turning into a more moderate intonation than the general’s commands.
  
"Come back here!" she yells.
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As clouds move in and out, as pianos and lizards and more fly about you, you begin to harness your mental exertions. Your thoughts change the flow of space. Darkness forms condensations, a funny thought tickles the gridlines.
 
 
As clouds move in and out, as pianos and lizards and more fly about you, you begin to harness your mental exertions. Your thoughts change the flow of space. Darkness forms condensations, and a funny thought tickles the intuitable gridlines.
 
  
 
Aha! You look around and see a key flying through space. A gigantic, golden key. It looks almost comical in its bluntness. Whatever. You go for it.
 
Aha! You look around and see a key flying through space. A gigantic, golden key. It looks almost comical in its bluntness. Whatever. You go for it.
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As you swim through the bright green space under the propulsion of your thoughts, Natalya morphs into a metallic glowing squid, and follows. You drop a floating mine. It knocks off three of her tentacles. She morphs into a big cannonball and falls up towards you.
 
As you swim through the bright green space under the propulsion of your thoughts, Natalya morphs into a metallic glowing squid, and follows. You drop a floating mine. It knocks off three of her tentacles. She morphs into a big cannonball and falls up towards you.
  
''KABOOM!'' Natalya explodes all over you, in an icky mess. You shoot out a hook, and reach for the key. The key turns into a door, and opens. You fly through. As you leave, the torus slips off your body.
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KABOOM! Natalya explodes all over you, in an icky mess. You shoot out a hook, and reach for the key. The key turns into a door, and opens. You fly through. As you leave, the torus slips off your body.
  
 
Behind you, Dawn’s gaze follows you. “You’ll want this.”
 
Behind you, Dawn’s gaze follows you. “You’ll want this.”
  
* [[Phase Q/System Lock|System Lock]]
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* [[Phase Q/New Dawn|New Dawn]]
* [[Phase Q/Free Fly|Free Fly]]
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* [[Phase Q/Free Fly]]
  
 
{{Phase Q}}
 
{{Phase Q}}

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